Caitlin Crowder

Dont let all the criticism get you down. You just need to play with it a little. I can tell theres emotion just under the surface, bring it out and ...

The Drug of Happiness I’m killing myself. I’m surely but slowly killing myself. She doesn’t want to be anything more than friends. And yet, I cant stop (trying) (wishing) what ...

I think it is set up well but it needs to flow better. I was a little confused by it which would be good if you were trying to be ...

ok well i def like this but u already knew this. i do think you could add some more to this though. details maybe. maybe something else could happen. or ...

I really like but I read the 2nd chapter first so now im a little lost as to how it all fits together but Ill figure it out. Maybe you ...

I really liked but it should be alot longer.I liked their chemistry but it woulve been alot better if you had to go through some waiting before she finds out ...

i THINK YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS VERY WELL. sorry bout that didnt realize caps lock was on. so anyway I loved. it. it was very descriptive and held my attention. ...

Well I really liked your story. I am a big fan of tragic love. I do agree with everyone about how it jumps inot sex way too fast. It reminds ...

Okay first of all I think you could have something good going here it just needs a little work. It has caught my attention but only after I forced myself ...

I know I'm just repeating what everyone else has said but i like rhyme. Especially since the first stanza rhymes. Its like a shock because you got this rhyme flowing ...

Well first of all I want to say that I love it. I havent read the first chapter but it was easy to pick up on. It is very easy ...

O.K.Honestly, I was just confused for most of it. Some of it made sense to me and I liked the format (t'was was really cool) but i just couldnt relate ...